Friday, September 24, 2010
Holidays
In the holidays I'm going to go on holiday to Raglan , Hamilton. Whakatane and then Rotorua . We are going to see my grandma and grandad in Raglan then my 3 cousins and Aunty and Uncle in Hamilton then my dads friend in Whakatane. After that going to my cousins in Rotorua . I so hope that we can go shopping at smiggle in hamilton and lots of other shops . My grandma is going to take me shopping some where she wont tell my where thought.
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2 comments:
Hi Chloe,
That sounds like it was fun. Can you tell me what did you do with your cousins? Next time you to remember to put capital letters for people, places and things.
From Amanda.
Hi Chloe,
I liked your story about your hollidays. I think you could use more info like what you did as well or what day you went there.
From Laura.
P.S. You made a small mistake with the word Hamilton, with a lower case letter not upper case in a sentence.
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