Hi my name is Kabain. Last saturday I played rugby. My teams name is Wairarapa Bush we lost the game. The other team won by 16/6. I got player of the day. You get a fizzy drink and a chocolate bar that is a Mars Bar.
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Hi Kaibain
Thank you for sharing your story I liked the how you told us the score and how you got player of the day.
To make you story better you need to use capital letters after the full stops and also need to tell us more information. Eg: Where and who you played?
1 comment:
Hi Kaibain
Thank you for sharing your story I liked the how you told us the score and how you got player of the day.
To make you story better you need to use capital letters after the full stops and also need to tell us more information. Eg: Where and who you played?
Corilee & Shania (Room 14 Lytton Street School)
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